Friday, March 27, 2009

Rewrite 4

The intention of my presence was an increasing incidence of your humanity experience, culminating in a possible maximum.

5 comments:

Nothing better to do said...

John 10 v10(b)

I am come that they might have life, and that they might have it more abundantly.

I used to pay attention at Sunday School!

Steve C said...

John 10:10(b), unless I'm mistaken.

Steve C said...

Rats! Thought I was first in on one of these at last!

Marcella said...

For years I thought that Jesus had come to give me life in a barn dance...

Ali said...

these rewrites of yours are driving me nuts! Please stop!!

Oh, and tidy up your blog